Friday, March 11, 2011

3 proposals...All about losing innocence at a young age.

Proposal 1- When you lose your innocence you are like koolaid with no sugar
Proposal 2- Busted up baby you all cut up......Losing your innocence as a child is like a cut up baby shoe, worthless.
Proposal 3- When you lose your innocence, you feel like a dirty rag.
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4 comments:

  1. Ollie MooreMarch 13, 2011 at 6:31 AM

    Youre not really showing/giving the idea that you are wanting to do with the metaphors.

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  2. Dante ChaneyMarch 13, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    idk really what to do.

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  3. HannahMarch 15, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    Innocence= a pure heart, clean things bla, bla, bla. Maybe you should have a connecting project. Like Yin and Yang, light with darkness, inocence with loss. Compare the two and the audience might get your idea.

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  4. Kt Cain AhMarch 19, 2011 at 12:28 AM

    you're making similes, not metaphors. try this one on for size for your innocence idea..

    "like a bloody tampon, i have been disposed."

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